literature

robotic

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Literature Text

cannot wait any longer
cannot draw another breath
body breaking far too quickly
mind working too far behind

since i woke without understanding
since i hurt myself without realising
since i left my heart in your open hands
i have been malfunctioning

robotic thoughts slip through
the cracks that are appearing
motions are becoming jagged
life remains, but hope is gone

why wait another second?
why pray for difference?
body breaks a little more
mind falls out of existence.
robotic thoughts slip through...

utterly dedicated to sjslack, due to the fact that she somehow managed to renew my creativity in the space of around 20 minutes XD
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-Smiles and bows-

You'd have gotten it back yourself eventually my dear.

I really like this poem...was it intentionally ironic it has a bit of flow to it? Most -unlike- a robots movements...;)

Good use of the full stop right at the end as well, almost as if the 'robot' has finally shut down without a mind. -Thumbs up with a grin-